Friday, May 14, 2010

Metaphor

1. I think the morning is like a fresh start
it changes everyday, and involves new opportunities
some days are a good new start and others make u want to restart your morning all over again.



2. if the poem said "each day is a new sheet of paper" the poem would be less effective because its not explaining exactly what's like a new sheet of paper, i like when poems are more specific so if it said "each morning is like a new sheet of paper, that you write on all day" then it would make more sense and would be more clear to the reader.

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